'we invite a poem with the sea as its theme.'
The Flood Tide
First Verse ( fourth draft )
There were crabs like spiders scrawling in the
mud and planing gulls cheered as a
flood tide seeped deeper bringing sticks,
sometime delayed by scrap piping or brick.
It drank the angle bathed the shell
licked the crinkle and drowned the smell
cooled the air and silvered space
like the redshank and peewit landing place.
Writing Mag. June 2013 issue p. 22
'we invite a poem with the sea as its theme.'
The Flood Tide
First Verse ( fourth draft )
There were crabs like spiders scrawling in the
mud and planing gulls cheered as a
flood tide seeped deeper bringing sticks,
sometime delayed by scrap piping or brick.
It drank the angle bathed the shell
licked the crinkle and drowned the smell
cooled the air and silvered space
like the redshank and peewit landing place.