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Internal combustion broken beyond belief

Opened up the heart but still no relief

Pain, and a feeling of disconnection

Alone, but don't feel like conversation

So me go deep inside

 far far within 

away from this place

to another space 

where I forget who I am

and that's the best

to forget my self.



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Hi Richie,

I like your poem, a bit sad but really good and I could connect with the sentiments.

Gill

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Good music Richie 🎵🎙

Asoka

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Thanks Gill - yeah I was quite melancholic at the time when I wrote that one. Still the experience as unpleasant as it was did teach me something, and I feel some clearer energy flowing now.

Aye the music has a good beat (-:

Peace and love