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The Power of Fewer Characters: Creative Writing

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Edited by Jim McCrory, Tuesday, 26 Nov 2024, 08:13



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The Power of Fewer Characters

I remember opening War and Peace with a sense of excitement and reverence. Tolstoy’s masterpiece, heralded as one of the greatest novels of all time, seemed to promise an unparalleled literary journey. Yet, as I waded deeper into its labyrinth of characters and historical intricacies, the excitement waned. I found myself flipping back to recall names, relationships, and motivations. Before long, I set the book aside, its complexities outstripping my patience and desire to connect.

This experience sparked a reflection on the kind of stories that truly resonate with me. Over the past decade, the books I have cherished most all share a notable characteristic: they revolve around a few central characters, allowing me to form deeper emotional connections. Stories like The Unlikely Pilgrimage of Harold Fry by Rachel Joyce, The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas by John Boyne, and the short stories of Flannery O’Connor and Tobias Wolff invite readers into intimate, focused worlds. Their casts are limited, their narratives precise, and their impact profound.

Why is it, I wondered, that these stories linger so vividly while sprawling epics like War and Peace slip through my fingers? The answer, I believe, lies in the simplicity and relatability of their character-driven storytelling.

In a novel like The Unlikely Pilgrimage of Harold Fry, we walk alongside Harold as he embarks on a journey of self-discovery, grief, and redemption. The narrative is stripped down to essentials: Harold, his wife Maureen, and a few individuals he meets along the way. This narrow focus allows us to inhabit Harold’s thoughts, fears, and longings. His journey becomes our journey, his transformation our transformation.

The same is true of The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas. With its childlike perspective and restrained cast, the story zeroes in on the innocence of Bruno and Shmuel amid the horrors of the Holocaust. This intimacy amplifies its emotional impact; by the end, the loss feels personal, as though we have been touched by tragedy ourselves.

Short stories, by their very nature, excel in this economy of focus. Flannery O’Connor’s tales, for instance, introduce us to deeply flawed yet vividly human characters, often grappling with moments of grace or despair. Tobias Wolff, too, captures entire worlds within the constraints of a few pages, showing how the lives of one or two individuals can illuminate universal truths.

The challenge with sprawling novels like War and Peace lies not in their artistry but in their overwhelming scope. Tolstoy’s work is a panorama of Russian society, history, and philosophy. It demands intellectual engagement, certainly, but it risks losing emotional resonance amidst its vastness.

By contrast, stories with fewer characters distil the complexities of human experience into relationships we can understand and relate to. These narratives invite us to linger in the spaces between words, to reflect on how a single person’s choices ripple outward. They are, in a sense, microcosms of life itself, where depth outweighs breadth.

From a reader’s perspective, fewer characters often mean a more immersive and satisfying experience. Instead of juggling a roster of names and subplots, we can invest fully in the people before us. This emotional connection enriches the story, making it more memorable.

The academic lens supports this view. Psychologists have found that readers form stronger emotional bonds with characters when narratives are less crowded. This phenomenon, known as narrative transportation, suggests that simplicity fosters empathy, allowing us to step more fully into the lives of fictional characters.

Of course, preferences vary. Some readers thrive on the grandeur of epic tales, where history and humanity collide on a grand scale. Others, like me, find solace and meaning in the quiet brilliance of smaller stories. This is not a judgment of merit but a recognition of what moves us most deeply.

For me, the books I treasure are those that invite me into the hearts of a few individuals and hold me there long after I turn the last page. They remind me that even in life, it is not the multitude of acquaintances that shapes us but the depth of our relationships. Perhaps that is why, as I grow older, I find myself reaching for the familiar comfort of fewer characters, fewer distractions, and a clearer window into the human soul.

Tolstoy will have to wait. For now, I am content walking alongside Harold Fry, sitting at the table with O’Connor’s flawed everypersons, and listening to the quiet whispers of Wolff’s characters. In their company, I have found a richness that even the grandest epics cannot rival.


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