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So, I chose to study the extended history part for the optional week and learnt more about the women's suffrage movement. I stand by my reasoning that learning a language for one week is paramount to useless, although I enjoyed Mandarin last term.

  • How has your knowledge been developed? 1) The difference between militant and peaceful action; 2) the way in which a historical narrative has been created that has the Pankhursts and the suffragettes at centre stage, meaning we miss out on a lot of the other nuances and groups of the time that led to female suffrage; 3) ultimately, World War I was a huge factor in extending the franchise to women.
  • What has helped you to learn? I enjoyed the radio clips and looking at the pictures in the museum online. The biographies were less interesting for me; I found that aural learning (via the radio programmes) coupled with a transcript for more detailed analysis worked well for me.


    I also handed in my TMA (03) - it's been a long while since I updated this blog! I'm losing heart rather with long-distance learning. I got 86/100, which I suppose is perfectly reasonable but I'm very disappointed. I thought that I had written a fairly good essay and was hoping for 90+. This course is making me question whether university and studying would actually be the right road for to take in a general sense, which is very disheartening as I have always thought of myself as someone who is academic and would have excelled at university had other life circumstances not got in the way. Now, I wonder if maybe university wouldn't have been all that great anyway, even if I had been well enough to go at a more 'normal' age. At 27, I feel old. There are many people older studying this access course, I realise, but they are doing other things with their lives. I have done nothing with mine but be ill and cause a lot of people a great deal of hassle. 

    Life just seems rather hard at the moment.

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Ellen-Arwen Tristram

Disappointment? TMA01

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Edited by Ellen-Arwen Tristram, Tuesday, 14 Nov 2017, 13:22

Reflecting on TMA01



I got 81/100 for my first TMA. My initial thoughts were: what happened to the other 19 marks? I've since been assured that actually 80% is good for university level work; I think I just set the standard too high for myself. I need to look at the mark in a new light. 

Basically, I'm in the 70-84% category. Breaking this down:

Knowledge and understanding: excellent

Thinking skills: good

Key skills: excellent/good

Personal development skills: good


I suppose I'm most disappointed with my thinking skills as being classed as only 'good' rather than 'excellent.' Where I fell down was in the second part in failing to explain why I'd used the example, although I just felt I didn't have enough words! I also know my work was marked down for not needing references, which I didn't realise I needed to do; in hindsight, I wish I'd asked my tutor beforehand. I also went slightly over the word limit, but I find it hard to imagine how I would have introduced more content without having an even higher word count.

Ultimately, I'm aiming for 'excellence' across the board, and I'm not entirely sure on how I'm going to get there. Obviously, sticking to the word count more rigidly and using references will be something I will do, but other than that I'm not sure yet. I'll come back and read my tutor's comments again.

So, rather disappointed but not a disaster.

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