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Stories That Trust the Reader: The Effaced Narrator

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Edited by Jim McCrory, Saturday 21 February 2026 at 12:10

“The wound is the place where the Light enters you.”
— Rumi

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Stories That Trust the Reader: The Effaced Narrator

Henning Mankell, in his book Quicksand, describes Robinson Crusoe as the greatest book ever written because of its effaced narrator; the narrator seems almost invisible. Nothing stands between the reader and the story. There is no heavy hand guiding emotion or interpretation. Instead, a kind of quiet, bilateral relationship forms, just the reader and the life unfolding on the page. I have always been struck by that idea. A book at its best does not perform for us; it trusts us. It steps aside.

As a child I recall an image that is still present in my vault of memory. It was an old black-and-white film. A bearded man stood in a dingy dungeon cell, stone pressing in on every side. The scene unsettled me, though I did not fully understand it then. Years later I found the moment in The Count of Monte Cristo. The passage read:

“Dantès remained stunned; he did not move; he scarcely breathed. At last, he raised himself on his knees, and stretching out his hands toward the small window through which a faint ray of light penetrated his dungeon, he exclaimed, ‘O my God! my God! have pity on me!’ and then, as if exhausted by the violence of his emotions, he fell with his face to the ground, uttering a groan that seemed to issue from the depths of the tomb.”

The “faint ray” of light offered hope as I read it. This is the man before the transformation, still pleading, still human, not yet the Count. The stone, the faint light, the cry toward heaven: this is the buried beginning from which everything else grows. The image of him on his knees clarifies the whole novel. Before there is brilliance, there is darkness. Before there is command, there is helplessness.

When I think about the novel, I begin to understand why it has held me for so long, even if I have never been able to explain these factors clearly. But just as a geologist sees in a stone something I don’t see, so it goes when having studied English literature, we unpack as we read.

Perhaps what moves me is something similar to what Mankell describes. The novel never feels like a lesson. It does not tell me what to conclude about justice, revenge, mercy, or fate. It simply presents a life — broken, remade, and tested — and leaves me inside it.

Edmond Dantès begins as an innocent young man, almost painfully open-hearted. Then betrayal comes, swift and irrational. He is sealed away, not only in a prison, but in isolation so complete that he nearly disappears as a person. What happens in that darkness is not dramatic in the usual sense. It is quiet. It is interior. Years pass. Knowledge replaces despair. Patience replaces panic. Something inside him refuses to die.

I think that is where my attachment begins.

The novel is often remembered for its elaborate revenge, its disguises, its glittering society scenes. But beneath all of that is a simple question: what does suffering do to a human soul? Dantès does not emerge unchanged. He is sharpened by loss. He becomes controlled, almost superhuman in his composure. Yet the reader remembers the young man in the cell. We carry both versions of him at once; the buried prisoner and the powerful Count. That dual awareness creates intimacy. We know what the world within the novel does not.

There is something deeply compelling about transformation that is not accidental. Dantès does not drift into strength; he builds it. He studies. He waits. He disciplines himself. The prison becomes, paradoxically, a place of preparation. The very space meant to erase him becomes the space that forms him.

Perhaps that is what holds me. The idea that the worst chapter of a life does not have to be its defining one. That burial is not the end of a story.

And yet the novel does not glorify revenge without question. As the Count moves through his carefully laid plans, doubt creeps in. Consequences ripple outward. Innocent people feel the aftershocks. By the end, the book feels less like a celebration of vengeance and more like a meditation on restraint and mercy. Justice proves more complicated than anger first suggests.

In this way, the novel, like Robinson Crusoe, trusts the reader. It does not insist. It invites. I, the reader, am left to weigh the actions, to feel the cost, to decide whether the transformation I admired carries shadows with it. I feel so much going on and this is why I feel it is the greatest novel ever written

When I close the book, what stays with me is not the treasure or the intrigue. It is the image of a man who endures long enough to become someone new and who must then decide what kind of man he wishes to be.

Maybe that is why it has always been my favourite. Not because I fully understand it, but because it continues to work on me. The story and I remain in conversation. And perhaps that quiet, bilateral exchange — the one Mankell describes — is what makes any book unforgettable.

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The Cost of a Good Day

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Edited by Jim McCrory, Saturday 19 July 2025 at 16:00

 

 

A vagrant wanders empty ruins.

Suddenly he’s wealthy.

Rumi

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We were just kids, only eleven, growing up in the Glasgow slums in the sixties. Without two pennies to rub together, my two pals and I used to spend our days exploring derelict buildings, poking around the rubble with sticks, always on the lookout for treasure—or anything that might spark our curiosity. 

One afternoon, I think it was Harry who spotted an old, weather-beaten jacket lying in the corner of a half-collapsed room. He rummaged through the pockets, and to our amazement, pulled out three five-pound notes and a ten-bob note. We stared in disbelief, then broke into wild cheers, dancing around as if we’d won the lottery.

With the ten-bob note, we treated ourselves to a slap-up meal from the chippy, and with the rest we each bought a tin of Creamola Foam. We mixed it with water in old jam jars and spent the rest of the day fizzing with delight, laughing and burping in the sunshine.

But looking back now, I sometimes wonder who that jacket belonged to. Three fivers and a ten-bob note; that could’ve been a man's wages for a week. Maybe he lost it on his way home, or maybe he never made it there at all. 

We were just boys, caught up in the thrill. But someone, somewhere, might have paid dearly for that joy. But eleven-year-olds don't think that far down the road.

Note: Creamola Foam,

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Creamola_Foam

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Wisdom For a Fragmenting World

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Edited by Jim McCrory, Sunday 27 October 2024 at 08:22

 

“Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and right doing, there is a field. I will meet you there.”

Rumi



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The Arab word Taarradhin (تراض) caught my attention recently. It means compromise, but with a depth that speaks of mutual satisfaction, where both sides walk away with dignity intact. It’s not about winning or losing but understanding—something rare and precious in today’s world. This word reminds me of Rumi’s line.

Rumi knew that life is not always about right and wrong. Sometimes, it’s about stepping into that middle ground where we let go of our need to be right and simply meet one another as humans. In a world that often pits us against each other, Taarradhin invites us to let go of pride and embrace humility, to seek healing instead of victory.

How often do we cling to our positions, imagining that peace can only be found through triumph? Yet the greatest resolutions come when both sides walk away unbroken, when we choose understanding over stubbornness. Compromise isn’t weakness—it’s courage. It’s the quiet strength of seeking connection over division.

As I look around, I see a world that feels increasingly divided. Social media fuels conflict, news cycles highlight only the most extreme positions, and people argue with a fervour that often seems more about proving their point than listening to anyone else. We are driven by a need to be right, a need to win. But in the noise of it all, we’ve forgotten that there’s a space in between—a space where Taarradhin lives.

What would happen if, instead of fighting to be heard, we fought to understand? If we could meet in that field beyond our judgments, where the goal isn’t to convince or to conquer, but simply to connect. This isn’t an easy ask. It takes humility to step away from our firmly held beliefs, to put aside our pride, and to meet someone with a heart open to understanding. But isn’t that where true progress happens?

When we let go of the need to win, we make space for something deeper—something that leaves us all a little more whole. And isn’t that the point? Life is less about being right, and more about learning to walk alongside one another, even when we disagree.


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