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Stories That Trust the Reader: The Effaced Narrator

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Edited by Jim McCrory, Saturday 21 February 2026 at 12:10

“The wound is the place where the Light enters you.”
— Rumi

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Stories That Trust the Reader: The Effaced Narrator

Henning Mankell, in his book Quicksand, describes Robinson Crusoe as the greatest book ever written because of its effaced narrator; the narrator seems almost invisible. Nothing stands between the reader and the story. There is no heavy hand guiding emotion or interpretation. Instead, a kind of quiet, bilateral relationship forms, just the reader and the life unfolding on the page. I have always been struck by that idea. A book at its best does not perform for us; it trusts us. It steps aside.

As a child I recall an image that is still present in my vault of memory. It was an old black-and-white film. A bearded man stood in a dingy dungeon cell, stone pressing in on every side. The scene unsettled me, though I did not fully understand it then. Years later I found the moment in The Count of Monte Cristo. The passage read:

“Dantès remained stunned; he did not move; he scarcely breathed. At last, he raised himself on his knees, and stretching out his hands toward the small window through which a faint ray of light penetrated his dungeon, he exclaimed, ‘O my God! my God! have pity on me!’ and then, as if exhausted by the violence of his emotions, he fell with his face to the ground, uttering a groan that seemed to issue from the depths of the tomb.”

The “faint ray” of light offered hope as I read it. This is the man before the transformation, still pleading, still human, not yet the Count. The stone, the faint light, the cry toward heaven: this is the buried beginning from which everything else grows. The image of him on his knees clarifies the whole novel. Before there is brilliance, there is darkness. Before there is command, there is helplessness.

When I think about the novel, I begin to understand why it has held me for so long, even if I have never been able to explain these factors clearly. But just as a geologist sees in a stone something I don’t see, so it goes when having studied English literature, we unpack as we read.

Perhaps what moves me is something similar to what Mankell describes. The novel never feels like a lesson. It does not tell me what to conclude about justice, revenge, mercy, or fate. It simply presents a life — broken, remade, and tested — and leaves me inside it.

Edmond Dantès begins as an innocent young man, almost painfully open-hearted. Then betrayal comes, swift and irrational. He is sealed away, not only in a prison, but in isolation so complete that he nearly disappears as a person. What happens in that darkness is not dramatic in the usual sense. It is quiet. It is interior. Years pass. Knowledge replaces despair. Patience replaces panic. Something inside him refuses to die.

I think that is where my attachment begins.

The novel is often remembered for its elaborate revenge, its disguises, its glittering society scenes. But beneath all of that is a simple question: what does suffering do to a human soul? Dantès does not emerge unchanged. He is sharpened by loss. He becomes controlled, almost superhuman in his composure. Yet the reader remembers the young man in the cell. We carry both versions of him at once; the buried prisoner and the powerful Count. That dual awareness creates intimacy. We know what the world within the novel does not.

There is something deeply compelling about transformation that is not accidental. Dantès does not drift into strength; he builds it. He studies. He waits. He disciplines himself. The prison becomes, paradoxically, a place of preparation. The very space meant to erase him becomes the space that forms him.

Perhaps that is what holds me. The idea that the worst chapter of a life does not have to be its defining one. That burial is not the end of a story.

And yet the novel does not glorify revenge without question. As the Count moves through his carefully laid plans, doubt creeps in. Consequences ripple outward. Innocent people feel the aftershocks. By the end, the book feels less like a celebration of vengeance and more like a meditation on restraint and mercy. Justice proves more complicated than anger first suggests.

In this way, the novel, like Robinson Crusoe, trusts the reader. It does not insist. It invites. I, the reader, am left to weigh the actions, to feel the cost, to decide whether the transformation I admired carries shadows with it. I feel so much going on and this is why I feel it is the greatest novel ever written

When I close the book, what stays with me is not the treasure or the intrigue. It is the image of a man who endures long enough to become someone new and who must then decide what kind of man he wishes to be.

Maybe that is why it has always been my favourite. Not because I fully understand it, but because it continues to work on me. The story and I remain in conversation. And perhaps that quiet, bilateral exchange — the one Mankell describes — is what makes any book unforgettable.

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Desert Island Tracks: Part Two

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Edited by Jim McCrory, Sunday 20 July 2025 at 19:55

 

"Music gives a soul to the universe, wings to the mind, 

flight to the imagination, and life to everything."

Plato

 

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One of the joys that my wife and I share is lying in the dark listening to Classic FM. One of the pieces that takes me to a place I know not is Miserere by Gregorio Allegri. When I listen to, say, music from the seventies or eighties, it takes me to a place I know. I recall feeling low one Christmas Eve, sitting with a beer in Glasgow’s city centre after Christmas shopping when “If You Leave Me Now” came on the jukebox. Every time I hear it now; I’m back in that bar when I was seventeen.

One evening I couldn’t sleep; it was about four a.m. I turned the TV on and there they were, the Muppets singing “Shiny Happy People.” Now, when I hear it on the radio, it takes me back to that sleepless night.

But Miserere by Gregorio Allegri takes me to a mysterious place where there is happiness, contentment, and that mysterious duende. I wonder, dear reader, where does it take you?

Gregorio ALLEGRI - Miserere Mei, Deus (+ Lyrics / OXFORD, Choir of New College)

I can imagine that as the years pass on a desert island, immense loneliness could set in, and Miserere would transport me to that special place.

I was living in Stavanger, Norway, in 1999. My boss had given us a lovely two-bedroom cabin with panoramic windows overlooking the water. One evening, I was alone, and an other worldly piece of music came on the radio. If you could match the way I was feeling as the sun cast its golden-hour light on the water, this ethereal piece championed it: Enigma’s “Return to Innocence.” Every time I hear it; I’m alone in that cabin watching the sun go down.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rk_sAHh9s08&t=5s

Who knows, I might never get home, but I would always want to remember my homeland as I sit there by my beach fire, old and grey, weathered by the sun. One piece that would always take me home is Highland Cathedral. Perhaps Lauren would allow me to have the video that accompanies the music to remind me of the paths I trod on those spring and summer days.

The piece was composed by two German composers. The tune symbolizes the historic and emotional ties between Scotland and those of Scottish heritage worldwide. The fact that it was composed by Germans adds a fascinating layer to its history, illustrating the universal appeal and adaptability of Celtic musical styles. This version is performed by the Highland Cathedral and when it hits the crescendo, it engenders hope—the hope of returning home one day.

Highland Cathedral Bagpipes HD

One of my favourite books as a child was Robinson Crusoe. I believe there is no other conclusion in a book that promises hope more. Here is the last paragraph from a public domain copy:

"As for myself, I returned to England, where, notwithstanding all the miseries I had suffered, I was still resolved not to go on board a ship again; but, like a true repenting prodigal, to settle at home and repent of all my follies; and, by a close application to trade and commerce, to get something honestly, and make a new score. And if ever I should be disposed to travel thither again, and to see the place where I first was cast on shore, and had made my abode for so many years without human society, or to seek after the poor remains of my unfortunate companions, I left directions with my successors, the Trustees of the Plantation, that the proper measures might be taken for it, and so I left it."

I remember reading this and feeling so happy for him that he managed to leave the desert island after 28 years.

It was Emily Dickenson who wrote a phrase in her poem that read "Hope is the thing with feathers" The poem describes hope as a bird that perches in the soul and sings continuously, never asking for anything even in the hardest times. Crusoe was like that bird. He recognised God in his dilemma albeit fiction. But his attitude impressed me albeit it was the writer, Daniel Defoe. And hope would define me as a sat on that beach sure I would arrive home one day.

What song would define that arrival? I had been a Runrig fan from my youth. For some reason although a lowlander, I felt a pull to the Highlands, particularly the Western Isles. That puzzle intrigued me throughout life. These years I had my DNA heritage analysed and discovered my roots are firmly in the Celtic grounds and my father’s line takes me to The Island of Islay on Scotland’s west coast. Perhaps some strand in my DNA was calling me.

In 1988 Runrig recorded Going Home. No other song would welcome me back home that the words and emotion that the songwriters and musicians embedded in that song. I’m home.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2tltFlmca-U&t=42s

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