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Good Prose is Like a Good Image, it Draws You In

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Edited by Jim McCrory, Sunday, 22 Sept 2024, 19:47




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The Prose

"It was now about the sixth hour, and darkness came over the whole land until the ninth hour. The sun was darkened, and the veil of the temple was torn in two. Jesus, crying with a loud voice, said, “Father, into your hands I commit my spirit!” Having said this, he breathed his last.

 When the centurion saw what was done, he glorified God, saying, “Certainly this was a righteous man.”  All the multitudes that came together to see this, when they saw the things that were done, returned home beating their breasts. All his acquaintances and the women who followed with him from Galilee stood at a distance, watching these things."


*****

 

 The passage is from the Book of Luke chapter 23: 44-49 in the World English Bible. It’s one of the most powerful moments in the Bible, isn’t it? The scene opens with this eerie, unsettling darkness that falls over the land in the middle of the day. It’s as if the whole world is responding to what’s happening—like nature itself knows something monumental is taking place. And then you get this stark image of the temple veil tearing in two. For people back then, that veil wasn’t just a piece of fabric—it represented the separation between humanity and God. The moment it tears, it's as if the barrier between heaven and earth is being ripped open, signalling that something has changed forever.

 And then Jesus speaks, with his last words being both a cry of surrender and trust: "Father, into your hands I commit my spirit." You can feel the weight of that. He’s not just physically giving up his life, but spiritually handing himself over to God. It’s such an intimate, deeply human moment. He’s been through unimaginable suffering, and yet his last act is one of trust in his Father.

Then there’s the centurion—of all people—who looks up at Jesus and realizes, “This was a righteous man.” It’s unexpected, isn’t it? Here’s a Roman soldier, part of the machinery that just crucified Jesus, and even he can’t ignore what’s happening. He glorifies God. It’s a recognition of something beyond just a man dying on a cross. The sheer gravity of the moment strikes him, and it’s like he’s speaking for the reader, too—like we’re meant to realize that something far bigger is going on.

And then, the crowds. They came to watch, out of curiosity or even cruelty, but by the end, they’re leaving in this strange silence, beating their chests in sorrow or guilt. There’s something haunting about that—the way the spectacle of death turns into this moment of collective realization. Everyone feels it, even if they don’t fully understand it.

Meanwhile, the people who loved Jesus—the women who followed him, his close friends—they stand at a distance, watching. You can imagine their heartbreak, their helplessness. They’re not just onlookers; they’re people who’ve been with him, who’ve shared meals and life with him, and now they’re witnessing this unbearable loss. They don’t say anything, but their silent presence says everything. It’s a grief that’s too deep for words.

All of it—the darkness, the tearing veil, Jesus’ final words, the centurion’s confession, the crowd’s change of heart—it pulls you in. You feel like you’re there, standing among the crowd, witnessing something that transcends the ordinary. It’s a moment where the physical and the spiritual collide, and it leaves you thinking, “What just happened?”


What just happened? Indeed.

 


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